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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jan 2, 2013 20:12:19 GMT -5
I will post excerpts from both of my novels on here soon in my excerpt thread.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jan 3, 2013 14:27:26 GMT -5
Here is an excerpt from my first novel The Forgotten Blade...
Joseph Darwin knew that he has to go to the castle where his master waits for him to be in the meeting with the others who do his bidding. Joseph knew his time will be coming for him to do great things for his master to be good for him.
Joseph knew what his master wants him to do from the bidding he asked of him. Joseph knows he needs to grab the sword of the light and bring it back to him from another castle away from here.
Joseph thought in his mind about what type of sword it is and how to get it away from his master’s arch rival. Joseph knew he will need to try his best to please his master no matter what else may concern him on his mind.
Joseph finds that he will need to do the task and complete it for his master. Joseph understands how everything is in his life to be good for him.
Joseph wonders if something will turn out to be in his favor. Joseph knows his order when he goes to the other castle away from here to sneak in and find the sword.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jan 3, 2013 17:56:36 GMT -5
Here is an excerpt from my Time travel second novel Unknown Destiny...
Prologue
Josephine wondered if she can find something to read for tonight. Josephine knows she will want a good book to read before she heads to bed and goes to sleep.
Josephine thought about looking in one of the old rooms for something to read. Josephine knew from the distant relative who left her the house the previous owner owned before him.
Josephine understands that she will have to go into one of the downstairs rooms to find a book or something to read that will be on the shelf. Josephine thinks in her mind about which room downstairs on the main floor to look into now that the home is hers.
Josephine walks out of her new bedroom down the hallway towards the stairs to go down them to head into one of them rooms. Josephine does not know why she inherited the house from some distant relative who used to live here but she has and is grateful for a place to live in.
Josephine walks towards the stars after coming down the hallway to them taking one step at a time down the stairs. Josephine knew she will want to head into what is supposed to be a library in one of the rooms on the main floor.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jan 7, 2013 16:53:42 GMT -5
Here is another excerpt from my first Historical Fantasy novel called The Forgotten Blade.
Joseph thinks in his mind about what he should do to be happy in his life. Joseph is happy at having the order his master gave him.
Joseph wonders if he will survive getting the sword known as the forgotten blade. Joseph figures something will be going right for him.
Joseph wishes to have things in his life turn into being great for him to be happy in his life. Joseph figures something needs to happen to make his task easy for him to do for his master.
Joseph feels he will need to complete the task his master set out for him. Joseph thought in his mind to be working on the task set forth from his master to go to the castle far away from here on horseback to get the Forgotten Blade sword.
Joseph wishes to have everything to work out fine for himself to be feeling right fine for him on the task he will do for his master. Joseph wonders if the task will either be difficult or not which is going to be depending on what needs to happen for him when he gets to the castle.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jan 8, 2013 19:17:14 GMT -5
Josephine understood how she will want to find a particular book of any kind the unknown relative left in his place. Josephine stepped off the last step of the stairs turning right to enter down the hallway to the left to go into the library.
Josephine knows what needs to happen for her to find some type of book worth reading. Josephine knew about what she will find in her distant relative’s home that she now lives in.
Josephine wonders if something will be turning right in her life to be good for herself. Josephine thought about how she will need to have something to read she looks through the shelves in the library.
Josephine wants things to happen to be finding a good book to read. Josephine spots a dusty sort of red and black book with fading writing on the side.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jan 9, 2013 21:50:38 GMT -5
Joseph thought for something to work fine in his life to happen for him. Joseph knew he will want to do what is right for his master he knows he will follow the orders.
Joseph figures anything to be going right in his life that he can deal with to be good for him. Joseph finds that something needs to happen to be working fine for him to be happy in his life.
Joseph is thinking in his mind about what he will need to do for something to be good in his life. Joseph knew that things happen in his life for different reasons he can handle to know more to be able to feel inside about what he will want to accomplish.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jan 19, 2013 6:34:18 GMT -5
Josephine thought that this must be an interesting read from pulling it off the shelf she notices the cover on it with a insignia of some kind. Josephine knows what needs to happen to be turning right for her to be happy in her life into thinking of anything g she does to be good for her.
Josephine thinks in her mind about what she will do to find out what it is that is inside that she will want to read. Josephine started to open the book and turn the page to open and read the book which she found out to be a diary.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jan 30, 2013 14:41:42 GMT -5
Joseph figures something needs to go right in his life to be good for him. Joseph understands how he will want something to be turning great in his life.
Joseph will want to have things to be great for him to understand how much he will want to have order carried out by himself. Joseph knows he will do what his master tells him to do and take out the order for himself to do what needs to happen to succeed.
Joseph finds that things happen for different reasons in his life he knows he should go to the castle of his master’s rival and find the sword. Joseph understands how he will want to do things to be good in his life for what he feels happens to work out right for him.
Joseph thought in his mind about what he will need to do for him to achieve his goal in his life. Joseph wanted to work out what is best for him after he finishes the order and task his master has for him.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jan 30, 2013 14:42:41 GMT -5
Josephine figures something to be going right for her to be happy with reading the diary to find out more about what happened in the man’s life. Josephine thought in her mind about what the man’s life is like back then that she knows she is curious to figure out more about him.
Josephine thinks in her mind about what she will find out more about the diary she is reading to know more about the previous owner who owned this home. Josephine wonders in her mind to think about what she will do to find out more information about the man who used to live here.
Josephine knows about what she will do to be happy about what she is reading in the diary. Josephine thought in her mind about how she will love to meet the man who used to live in her home.
Josephine wonders if the time difference back then was much different then hers. Josephine thinks in her mind about what needs to happen to be great at what she thinks about the man.
Josephine decided to go back upstairs to her bedroom to sleep after she reads a few more pages in the diary. Josephine figures something will need to happen to be turning right for her to be happy at what she finds out about the man.
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