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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jan 7, 2012 15:52:22 GMT -5
Here is the excerpt from my first novel A Night Of Mystery...
Prologue
A young man wearing breeches and a tunic with boots walks across the lawn at night heading straight for the castle. He arrives at the doors to the castle as he takes out a small key to unlock the doors to open one of them to be let inside the castle where he knew he has to meet his master and others for a meeting.
He closes the door behind just as he locks the doors back up. He walks into one of the parlor rooms to meet his master and the others before the meeting can commence to start.
He looks at his master and his fellow associates in the meeting his master is running. He knows he must do something that his master wants him to. He just does not know what can happen if he makes a mistake once he has an order from his master.
His master looks at him showing his fangs as he said, “Thomas I want you to do a task for me I need you to have the fledglings ready to find their meals in town. And make sure its the perfect blood from the humans that has not been tainted by illnesses in this town do you understand me Thomas.”
Thomas nods his head yes as he leaves his master with some of the men. Who are the fledglings to go into town where he can find some people with the perfect blood that has no ill gene in their bodies.
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Post by RhiaRaye on Jan 7, 2012 18:21:23 GMT -5
Hmm, I wonder what that ill gene could be about... Very interesting, Marie!
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jan 10, 2012 10:41:02 GMT -5
The ill gene is a disease in the blood that could make the creatures and vampires ill if they drink from anyone who has the ill gene.
Here is an excerpt from my novel A Cursed Life In Town...
Prologue
A young man arrives in town looking for a place to stay he knew he needs to find a place where he can be comfortable in the town of Aurora. Where he can at least come up a topic to talk about with some people in town that could lead him to a place where he can stay for a few nights until everything is alright for him to leave again.
Never embroiled in its dark secrets of a curse upon the town. By someone who was executed who wanted the people to suffer in the town for the crimes. They committed against the person who wanted them dead.
He comes to a house asking for shelter never knowing there is danger outside of town that the curse comes from that could make everyone in town act differently at the stroke of midnight.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jan 13, 2012 16:27:43 GMT -5
This is part of chapter one of A Cursed Life In town... I will try to post another excerpt form A Night Of Mystery soon.
Jason Williams arrives in a carriage heading into town as the carriage stops in front of an inn he has never seen before. He knows he will have to decide if he would want to stay in this town or just pass through. He knew from having his doctor license that he would have to be in a place to stay for a few nights he told the driver of the carriage to stop and help him down to grab his bags. He carries his doctor's bag with him after stepping down the last step while the driver grabs his bags to walk with him to the front doors to the inn.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jan 13, 2012 19:38:00 GMT -5
Here is another excerpt from my novel A Night Of Mystery...
Rick Thompson lives in the castle from years ago with the other vampires and creatures hoping for a good like to be away from the deaths happening. He knew years ago from Thomas's death at an early age that he sometimes fails in his tasks from the master of the house. Who is their leader Mark Arron he will have to find a way to survive to not be taken down with shame. From the other creatures and vampires in the castle where he can at least have some freedom and not be tied down to anything happening.
Rick knew he needs to find love and be a survivor in the battles he will have to face against their leader if he is not careful and does not become killed on the spot.
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Post by marielaurent2223 on Jan 13, 2012 20:12:40 GMT -5
I am sorry i got the last names of my two different characters mixed up now i am happy i changed it.
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Post by RhiaRaye on Jan 14, 2012 8:58:25 GMT -5
Really great excerpts, Marie! I can't wait to read more!
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